2016年12月四级写作真题解析

考研英语来源：中国考研网 2016-12-19　

第一套：

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180words.

第二套：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

第三套：

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation. One is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180words.

命题解析

2016年12月四级写作命题再次体现了强烈的反押题倾向，考察了以前从未考察过的一种情景作文：正反对比型情景作文，类似于以前的老托福写作题目。考察的话题关于大学毕业的选择：第一套题目关于就业与创业，第二套题目关于去国企还是合资企业，第三套关于就业还是考研。这三套题目均来自于2013年考研英语（一）的大作文：大学毕业生的选择。

在2016年12月之前的新东方在线四级写作课程中，笔者详细讲解过情景作文的写法，并提供了十大必背范文供考生背诵，其中第一篇教育、第二篇网络与教育、第四篇课程、第六篇参与、第七篇教育中诸多表达均可使用。只要考生提前背过，应该感觉易如反掌。

2016年10月笔者出版的《四级写作与翻译终极预测20篇》中，第14篇职业选择、第15篇兼职、第16篇情景作文（最爱的工作）、十大万能框架第三篇教育均可使用，其中第14、16篇及第三篇万能框架几乎全文均可使用。下面的精彩范文即来自于第16篇最爱的工作，只改动了主题词。

综上所述，虽然四级写作反押题倾向明显，但只要考生认真准备，取得高分并非难事。

第一套详解：

精彩范文

In the past two years of my college life, I have never ceased to think what kind of work I shall take up upon graduation. Although my ideas are not consistent,I have now decided to start a business of my own as my lifelong career.

A variety of factors have led me to make this decisionover other more lucrative ones. To begin with,running my own business means freedom and independence. As aperson having my own business,I am free to use my own ideas and make my own decisions, a privilege not everyone can have, even those with highly-paid positions. More importantly, I likestarting my own business in that it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catch a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, no more worries about your paycheck which is steady, if not handsome.

Nothing, not even a big salary, can equal for the satisfaction of being your own boss and a gentle peace of life.

参考译文

在过去两年的大学生活中，我一刻也没有停止过思考：我大学毕业以后要干什么工作。尽管我的想法很多，但我现在已决定，我将开创我自己的事业。

有很多理由使我做出这个选择而不是其他较赚钱职业的决定。首先，创业意味着自由和独立。当一名创业人员我可以有自己想法的自由，有自己作决定的自由，而这个特权不是每一个人，甚至拿高薪的人都能拥有的。其次，我喜欢创业，是因为这个工作给我一份安宁。我无须每天早上去赶汽车，无须为如何讨好老板，如何不落在人家后面而焦虑不安，无须担心自己的工作收入，虽然不那么丰厚，但却十分稳定。

没有什么东西，甚至高工资，可以抵得上自己做主人的乐趣和平静安宁的生活。

亮点词汇

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道长点评

四级写作已经多次考察情景作文，如：2014-6：What is the Most Interest Place in China（中国最有趣的地方是哪儿），2014-6：What is the Most Interesting Place in Your Hometown? （你的家乡最有趣的地方是哪儿）， 2014-6：What is the Most Interesting Place in Your Campus?（你们校园最有趣的地方是哪儿），希望考生引起高度重视。

句型拓展

1、To make my lectures more constructive and stimulating, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world——the very thing I enjoy in my life.

要使我的课更有启发性，更生动有趣，我就得读更多的书，探索新的知识，对世界要有更好的了解，而这正是我生活中最喜欢干的事。

2、This is inevitable because ours is a society whereone’s income is still determined by the knowledge you possess.由于我们社会中一个人的收入仍然由你所拥有的知识所决定，因此这一点不可避免。

With the growing number ofcollege graduates being turned out each year, the situation inthe job marketis getting tighter and tighter.随着每年毕业的大学毕业生越来越多，就业市场的形势越来越严峻。